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Brigitte

Can someone please rate and review my post? : ) I will review yours' back

this is one of my latest post "Eye Makeup for Blue eyes" it's like a part #1

I need to know if I'm being clear, and understandable in this article, here is the link

http://fashionjunkiegirlz.blogspot.com/2010/08/eye-makeup-for-blue-...

I would like to know if you found anything wrong, or if you don't understand something, anything, I would like to know if my article is good.

Thank You!
I can review your article or blog if you want :)
Just reply to this message

-Brigitte

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Hi Brigitte -

I just read your post and seemed very clear to me. Will you be doing one for brown eyes? ;-)

Great job!

If you get a chance, come visit me at my blog - The Toy Box Years!

~ Jennifer
http://thetoyboxyears.blogspot.com
Hi Jennifer,

Thank you so much! : )
Yes, hopefully this week I will be doing one for Brown eyes, and then Green eyes :)

I will be visiting your blog,
Thank You!

-Brigitte

Jennifer Belo said:
Hi Brigitte -

I just read your post and seemed very clear to me. Will you be doing one for brown eyes? ;-)

Great job!

If you get a chance, come visit me at my blog - The Toy Box Years!

~ Jennifer
http://thetoyboxyears.blogspot.com
I think the content is good (I have blue eyes and I've never quite known what eye makeup to wear!), however, there are a number of spelling/grammatical errors that I think cause the article to look somewhat less than professional. I have done some editing/proofreading in the past and have an interest in doing more of this type of work. I would be willing to do some corrections and make suggestions on this article for you at no cost, in order to start building a 'portfolio' of work. If you're interested, please let me know (twohandedmommy@gmail.com) and I can get started. Thanks!
Hi, sorry for the delay in answering

thanks for your opinion, yes I do notice that now and then,

I just emailed you! :)

-Brigitte

Dawn Clark said:
I think the content is good (I have blue eyes and I've never quite known what eye makeup to wear!), however, there are a number of spelling/grammatical errors that I think cause the article to look somewhat less than professional. I have done some editing/proofreading in the past and have an interest in doing more of this type of work. I would be willing to do some corrections and make suggestions on this article for you at no cost, in order to start building a 'portfolio' of work. If you're interested, please let me know (twohandedmommy@gmail.com) and I can get started. Thanks!
I do like your blog, it is very informative. I didn't see anything that struck me as "wrong", you've done a great job!
Monica
http://beadsandbrew.blogspot.com/
Hi Brigitte. It's my first day at mom bloggers. I just read your post, and left a comment. It was very clear and comprehensive. I have blue eyes so I can use this info.

Please visit my blog educationtipster. http://educationtipster.blogspot.com

I help out other writers, review books, and give educational tips for moms and teachers.
Thanks, kathy
Thank You!! :)

- Brigitte

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